Have incorporated most of the feedback here and uploaded a new vid! Obviously no obligation AT ALL to watch but just wanted to acknowledge that I actually listened
Changes:
- Have ordered a stabiliser (yet to arrive)
- Invested in Adobe Premiere and got rid of the 'corporate presentation' style slides in-between sections. Not sure about one of the transitions, but it let me try a new technique
- Stuck to < 10 mins
- Added more music
- Tried to retain cuteness
- Thought more about lighting - still perfecting this, but my intervals clips were better
- Injected my personality a little more
- Bought a Maurten sample gel pack
Thanks again! Still have a way to go, but I'm happier with the quality of this one