Critique of my orginal music?

I appreciate the lofi recording so I won't knock you for that, but you can still do some things to imrpove the recording. for instance in your first song every time you add a new track you can hear a new layer of static and you can hear when these layers are removed too; you should try to remove this because it's distracting. And idk your vocals rub me the wrong way, particularly the harmonization feels kind of dissonant like i can pick out each of the voices and your falsetto vocals come across kind of weird. Also there were times that you were too close to the microphone with your vocals.

On a larger scale, it is clear from your google page (just the fact you have a google page), and the fact that you've made this same post in several forums in the past year that you are a grade A madman. It's going to be hard for people to take you seriously, but I think there is a niche you can occupy by embracing your social disabilities, kind of like Viper the rapper. It will probably require you to do some of this recording and show your face though. Take cues from this guy:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NObhp1b41UE

Also now that you are here please give me a critique of my original music

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f6OtuLtl4eA

Thanks for listening and your opinion. I don't why I would be a madman for having a google page though. Lots of "normal"people have google sites.

I listened to your music but most of it is not music but sound. The music was ok. If were a full length piece it would be good. Sounds like early 70's George Harrison.

Much better than the last recording I heard of yours on this site.

But dude, spend 100 bucks on a used mbox and cheap condenser mic, it will improve your recordings an enormous amount. Or are you recording on a phone or ipad? They make microphones that plug directly in that will sound a ton better.

I like the synth you used.

Not too bothered about 0:00-0:50 - the vocals are a bit cringey (Marc Bolan?) and the music isn't very interesting. But 0:50 onwards is good, I like it. I like the low fi recording, tape hiss etc. as well - it's got the vibe of a demo tape put on a punk compilation from a stoner band that's really more into Hawkwind. You use panning which many bands hardly do, so that's good. And you've got a good sense of harmony and texture.

Your yt channel needs some variety though. It's a faceless wall of the same logo. Can you do some video? Film yourself doing hippy dippy stuff in weird colours -show yourself, and smile when you do it, have fun. I'm enjoying listening to your songs btw and am warming to your vocals.