This was a fun read. Some quick observations if Rojo and Wejo are getting into the long-form business:
* Writers need to learn to write and editors need to learn to edit. You don't need to go to journalism school to do this (though it doesn't hurt to go to the right ones), but you do need to learn how to describe people, events and scenes and organize stories so they actually make sense.
* One of the strengths of this story, and there are many, is that it isn't written first-person, as so much crap is these days.
This was overall a good read and well-reported. But a little more attention to writing and detail could have made it great.
These are great points that should be noted.