If you want your online opinion pieces to read like real journal articles, you'd do well to strip out all of the misleading qualifiers. Take your first paragraph:
"One of the most dominant beliefs of conventional training wisdom is that increasing weekly mileage results in improved performance. Numerous runners have anecdotally reported that when they increased their weekly run mileage that their performance improved, sometimes significantly. Additionally, it is commonly believed that the fastest distance runners in the world, the elites of the sport, generally all(Ed. note -- what does "generally all" mean?) train with relatively high weekly mileages. It is not unusual for elite runners to report running 100 or more miles per week. Finally research studies consisting of runner surveys generally find that the faster runners tend to run higher weekly mileages than do slower runners, which has generally been interpreted to mean that the higher mileage produces the faster runners. These observations - personal experiences, anecdotal data of elite training mileages, and research surveys - have been sufficient to convince many runners that increasing mileage not only results in improved performance but that it is the best way to do so."
It is wrong to conflate facts with "beliefs" - creationists do this all the time with regard to evolution in an attempt to advance their agenda. Not only that, but your "...best way to do so" line is gratuitous in that it in no way follows from the rest of your introduction; regardless of your intent, it seems to imply that those who enjoy improvements following increased training mileage do not concomitantly increase the amount of faster, more intense running they do. Try this instead:
"Distance runners have frequently observed that increasing their weekly mileage results in improved performance. Numerous runners have reported that when they increased their weekly mileage, their performances improved significantly. Additionally, the fastest distance runners in the world train with high weekly mileages; elite runners commonly report running 100 or more miles per week. Research demonstrates that higher training mileage is correlated with faster times. These observations suggest that increasing mileage results in improved performance."
Even this could be reduced to a few sentences without sacrificing its meaning:
"Distance runners have frequently observed that increasing their weekly mileage results in improved performance; elite runners commonly report running 100 or more miles per week, and research demonstrates that higher training mileage is correlated with faster times. These observations suggest that increasing mileage results in improved performance."
There's your abstract.
With your approach, any chance of your being regarded as an objective reviewer by an alert reader is compromised beyond repair.